Competitions: The Winners Announced!

Competitions: The Winners Announced! A great crowd showed up to the announcement of the writing competition, we had 120 people come down to the LibraryMuseum and pack out the foyer. Congratulations to all our winners (listed below) and Thank you to all who came to celebrate the evening.

Short Story Competition (open)

There was no theme for the open short story competition in 2011. Entrants were asked to submit a story in 3000 words or less. The winning and highly commended entries are available to download (below).

Winner: Beverly Lello, The Solution

Through the caring portrayal of an older man's grief at his son's death, the story takes us unexpectedly to his deepening relationship with his young grandson. The moments between them have a complicated tenderness, with a nicely understated emotional pull. There is room with these two characters for a much longer story if that is the author's wish, but the story succeeds on it's own terms at its present length. Warm and well-paced, The Solution achieves that difficult thing: in a few short pages, it makes you believe that people can heal from loss.

Highly Commended: Rosemary Borella, Cuckoos

A neighbourhood drama over the new folks who've moved in and the narrator's innocent gesture of friendliness. The foreigners are another species and the fears turn out to be well-founded. Cuckoos is imaginative and intriguing, leaving room for more than one reading.

Highly Commended: Susan Yardley, Hunting the Button

A quick, clipped description of a man's nineteen days in "the hole" — solitary confinement. The author's selection of certain convincing details (like the button) and the increasing disarray of his thoughts bring the reader along for the descent.


Nano Story Competition - Read the winning and highly commended entries in all categories

In 2011 the schools' competition, with categories ranging from Year 3 to Year 10, asked the students to write a 'nano' story - a story in exactly 50 words. The Nano Story Competition proved popular among students with some quite imaginative stories submitted - some even managed to include the signature short story 'twist' at the conclusion, a great effort in only 50 words! 

Year 9 and 10

Winner: Clare Cudars, Just Sleeping

Highly Commended: Jacqui Garvey, Cry as the Eagle

 

Year 7 and 8

Winner: Liam Harrison, Trapped

Highly Commended: Mikaela Rixon-Zonnenbergs, The Day We Lost Everything

Highly Commended: Darcy Rhian White, Our Murray

Highly Commended: Alexandra Croft, The Beast 

 

Year 5 and 6

Winner: Eliza Carey, Gotchya!

Highly Commended: Laurence Adorni-Dickson, Oops I Wet The Bed

Highly Commended: Ephraim Zilberman, Surprise

 

Year 3 and 4

Winner: Mattea Little, The Huge Storm

Highly Commended: Miriam Cereman, Friends

Highly Commended: Alana Diver, The Eagle's Thoughts

 


Write around the Murray would like to send a big "Thank you" to the judges of our competitions this year. We appreciate the time and effort you have committed to the competitions. We acknowledge: Steven Amsterdam, Jane Downing, Louise D'Arcy, Dylan Clift, Susan Berran, Margaret Royle and Shirley Dobson.Write around the Murray would also like to say "Thanks" to the Friends of the Library for their continued support.   


 

 

PDFThe Solution by Beverly Lello (95 KB)

PDFCuckoos by Rosemary Borella (142 KB)

PDFHunting the Button by Susan Yardley (104 KB)

PDFWinners and Highly Commended entries Nano Story Competition (362 KB)